Too short, but a lot of potential here.

LOL

Well it was short for sure its notbad of a film I mean I could see you either making this longer or just adding more short flicks all together in one piece here but overall this was pretty good and some nice animation and some nice smooth flow of the animation.

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I could see you either making this longer or just adding more short flicks all together in one piece

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This was awesome, short but sweet. Lovely old school animation.

Sigh. The fact that anyone would think this lacks plot doesn't get it. It's a micro-plot, and it's all there in glorious monochrome.
Haha, this was so perfect!
Shinji, this is why your father and I are separated. He's a douchewaffle and I'm a sacred walrus.

A bit short but... well done. What a difference from the original version too, not just with the music and lack of color but the entire style overall. Interesting alternative version.

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