So my program is getting cut off because I have no money to reactivate it. Oh well, just take a mandatory break I guess. I hope you like this one, as I would put more but I think today is the day I would pay up. And I can't.
Also I'm listening to any critique or advice but do know we are all not the best. Voice actors and me. We're all trying to learn and this is the best we could do. So I'm listening but the voice actors aren't, 'cauuse they don't have a newgrounds.
Thank you and Happy (early) Halloween!
I think you may be better off reducing the length of the animation considerably. There isn't a lot of action or exciting twists and turns throughout a lot of it, and because a lot of the animation is simple, having such a long running time can quickly make things boring.
It may also help with your budget for this. If it gets cut down in running length it may work out better for you. It may be hard but try cutting it down to at least half the length of this one.
The voice acting is fine, it's the volume that's the issue.
The volume of the dialogue is all over the place, some characters are much louder than others, sounds like its clipping in places. The music about 10mins is drowning out the characters and some of the sound effects also too loud.
It's a good idea to check the VU meter in the software you're using after all the audio is combined.
Well that's quite helpful but I'm stupid in technology talk so....VU meter?