I liked the visual style of your art and the way you integrated it with the style of the game itself. Adding the loading screen tick marks and accurate background sounds were a great way to bring the viewer into a "twitch" like viewing experience, albeit a comical one at that.
Great Work can't wait to see your next one!
p.s. -Maybe do one about crazy fort building campers in fortnight, although that games maybe a little over done at this point, I think you could make a funny spoof about it