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I love the scream of pelo

I liked the visual style of your art and the way you integrated it with the style of the game itself. Adding the loading screen tick marks and accurate background sounds were a great way to bring the viewer into a "twitch" like viewing experience, albeit a comical one at that.

Great Work can't wait to see your next one!

p.s. -Maybe do one about crazy fort building campers in fortnight, although that games maybe a little over done at this point, I think you could make a funny spoof about it

Love the visuals

Wow this was really nice and really loved the "VISUALS" on this one you even made it funny and has a dark element to it, so this was a really good submission, I dont see any need for any changes on this one, you went all out and made it the best it can be so nice work, What struck me as really cool In this one was how you were able to have so many cool looking things going on. It doesn't take much to know that this is well done. I am glad I checked this one out. Just remember Imagination is everything so be creative and let the imagination create some new and exciting stuff.

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I dont see any need for any changes on this one, you went all out and made it the best it can be so nice work

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Great consistent visual style, as some others noted the pacing was a little slow at times but it flowed pretty well over all!