The first part of this game completely shatters the "Show, don't tell"rule. At the very least, show us slides, like in a comic book, of what is going on. Let pictures tell the story, not long paragraphs of uninteresting monologue. As opposed to tell us how much the protagonist loves ramen, have an interraction to show it.
Some of the backgrounds do not have the same art style, which withdraws me from the world of ramen and reminds me that I am playing a game on Newgrounds.