ok.

Lines like "That's Crishtella, the girl I'm into. She has the nicest little throat I've ever seen in my lie." just kill me.

I loved the writing, and I would watch this

Amusing

So this was nice the animation on this was pretty good and I thaught you had some nice jokes in this so the humor was there the long intro was kind of good was confused about that I do think the actual toon itself could be longer and that's just one idea of opinion but regardless you have impressed me with this little animation here and I look forward to much more keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The actual toon could be longer

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new series?