Scene 8 of my 17 scene movie.
Missing for over 3 years, Agent Lotia is back! She's joined by Conrad, Lucia and A.R.T. in a race against time to hunt down her mutant clone, the Nikrea, before her infectious decease takes over the city.
I'm not a 3-D animator, but I can see you can only take criticism from people who make a career out of this and who are experts. My biggest thing for you, is learn how to take constructive criticism. All I can say is keep at it, practice and listen to what people have to say because they may see something that you may not. Even if it seems malicious, try and take what you can improve from it.
Far from it, I welcome constructive criticism. I've been doing this in my free time for many years, a lot of time and effort goes into it for free, so I will defend my work against those that want to bitch without backing up their own comments. There's been a couple on here doing just that. For instance, just because I've rated one of my animations adult and contains nudity, I've received extremely negative comments and a crappy rating. You look at their profile, and what do you know, it's full of hentai. It's silly things like this that show some peoples comments and ratings are complete bull.
Thank-you for yours though, I appreciate it.
Keep at it, the plot looks pretty solid, I'd try to get the context to be more realistic, there's a million ways to do that, adding animation to the water, leaks, grit on the walls, ambient sounds mixed at a low levels so they don't cover voices. Vocals sound a bit too reverbed, probably the room they're being recorded on lacks acoustic treatment? Animations could use some love too.
Overall it looks raw but there's something there
Time to go over a few of your points. There is a slight movement in the water, there's no need to have it flowing. Leaks? Why? Grit on the walls? They're all textured gritty enough. Vocal wise, everyone was free to record their voices in their own times in their own homes. I no longer have the setup since having to move house to provide a recording area, so this was the next best thing.
After viewing your two "movies" which barely resemble any form of real animation, you're not one to judge anybody on the effort put into animation.
Grow up.