I really like this man! I would say for advise, try to add more inbetweens. I would also like to say the audio has really good quality, and song was well put together; nice rhymes. :)
An animated music video for Gus Johnson's song "I Won't Wear A Jacket"
I also made this kind of a long time ago so it definitely shouldn't reflect my current skills!
I really like this man! I would say for advise, try to add more inbetweens. I would also like to say the audio has really good quality, and song was well put together; nice rhymes. :)
I didn't make the song lol, It was actually made by Gus Johnson. Thanks tho!
Ha, he has no friends, kinda reminds me of someone. Like me :(
I like the song, and the style of the animation is pretty cool. The visual presentation could have been a bit more crazy, but you did design the character to fit the song. I did like him pulling out the baby (though though a five year old doesn't look like that). The animation wasn't very good, and the ending was just awkward, and not in the right way. The mouth and eye animations weren't fluid at all and there was pretty much no other movement so it was not very good-looking or satisfying. The mouth itself looked really awkward. Still, you say you made this a while ago so you've probably gotten better. You just need to put a little more interesting stuff into the visual presentation and a bit more effort into things like that ending.
Thanks for the feedback I'll keep that in mind for sure. The reason the ending was long was just because on YT you can leave end card links to other videos but, I didn't even remember to cut it for the NG version.
Definitely feel this, you managed to tell a story in minutes & goes in hand with your creativity man x.