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3 weeks of struggle. finally finish my short before Madness Day.
Had to make a sequel to CHASM.fla https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/706000
Big Thanks to CturiX for some audios
Original Idea by Prov22
Special Thanks to:
Jsoull- For Background ideas
kRyy- For Background ideas, Gave me Motivation
SentryTurbo- Gave me motivation
Kelzad- For Background ideas, Being coolest
Thece- Gave me motivation
Kote1337- Gave me motivation
Krinkels- Gave me motivation
Gibb50- Gave me motivation
Cethic- Gave me motivation
Djjaner- Gave me motivation
Dachi- Helped me with sprites
Botdon- Gave me motivation
Cymbourine- Being coolest
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Pretty good, but very short.

You have so literally created a unique badass masterpiece. The dark eerie theme, and whackiness of the demon character was unique to your animation. It is quick and to the point. I like it.

Decent animation and a nice background, but rather short.

Also, you could have at least asked Cethic if it was okay to use his sprites, but you decided it would be fine to not ask and shoot his motivation straight into the ground. C'mon, you don't need to do the .fla stuff that everyone is doing to stay relevant, come up with original ideas instead of blatantly ripping from someone else.

Great animation, only, you used Cethic's sprites without his consent. Also, work on the quality on the cracks, there should be more thin lines and more spread apart. Details would be appreciated in the animation. Work on the shading and lines for the rock island, it looks too bland. Remember to add some light and tones to add more depth into the figures.

Unbiased I can say the animation is good and the more detailed work on the other place is interesting, but that doesn't change the fact you ripped the dark toned agents with messed up teeth from my (still in production) short without asking.

The length is barely a minute only because of the intro and outro title and the music is super super quiet.

It's alright. It's not outstanding, but it's alright.

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3.58 / 5.00

Sep 21, 2018
8:27 AM EDT

Plenty more like this here!