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Man Vs Nature: The Ocean - Second Trailer

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Man Vs Nature: The Ocean, is the next story in the series of "Man Vs Nature". This series shows that on going 'war' between man and nature, therefore show their true colours...

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This has a unique visual and design to it, however, the shading in this is very bland and almost little to no smooth movement. Everything just seems so rigid and stiff, if you could make this a bit smoother and colorful, then I would consider rating it 4.5 stars.

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So I really like the "VISUALS" here it was something different, I did find this short and would love to see you ad more or even make a full running series, the idea is really good here, I would Recommend a few things that could be Ironing out and Refine a few areas to make this flash more into a Victory but as I start this one up it was a good start of works. What can I say more, you won some awards for this great submission the award speaks for it self and shows off your effort in making this, so great effort and great entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I did find this short and would love to see you ad more or even make a full running series

~X~

Nice work building up a compelling atmosphere with minimal usage of visuals here! And a date that seems almost prophectici for the release, too. I'm looking forward to this! Seems intriguingly dark and dystopian. And maybe tied to reality in a way others aren't.

-cd-

The style is cool, and I like the music you've chosen to represent the unsettling mood. However, the trailer didn't show much of that inner beast. I mean, yeah, he's hunting. Why wouldn't he be? Anyways, I like the colors and you used some pretty good shots so visually, this seems quite interesting. It's just the plot that felt a bit generic. I guess him holding the spear at night is interesting. I mean, like, maybe you could have shown something unique in the trailer story-wise. It could still be cool, it just doesn't seem that unique.

BaileysART responds:

Thank you for the feedback, the whole idea for this video is showing a man slowly lose his mind and trying to figure out what is real, and what isn't. However since the project is completed I'll take your advice and make sure to improve upon my next animation.

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780
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Votes
135
Score
3.51 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 31, 2018
12:10 PM EDT
Genre
Drama
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  • Daily 5th Place September 1, 2018