Love the art style, although I feel you're uncomfortable with drawing hands because you didn't draw the jerking off scene, or BB's hands when you fuck her roughly and grab her by the hips, and have expertly hid raven's hands behind her butt and cut off her other one. Some tips for you are even if it isn't much I'd like to see BB's dick move instead of having the whole picture shake it just gives it something extra to the whole shebang. Have there be some kind of text skip option so those of us who want to see all the dialogue options don't have to go through all the text again and again. And maybe tweak the swapping of assets so the couch doesn't appear from behind Raven's ass. Overall a decent game, could use some touch ups, but I'm looking forward to your later releases.