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Pixel Bytes - EP1- Sir Pixel Studios

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you basically copied asdf movies

Sirpixelstudios responds:

All the skits in it were original, it took a week for me to make.

It was meant to be similar to asdf

The animation isn't much, but the artstyle is fun. Some of the jokes are good, but some lack a setup. The waffle one was kinda pointless, it wasn't really funny. The one with the baby could have been good, but it just didn't feel like the joke had any buildup. Maybe if you let the joke sit for a bit longer. I loved "you have humans" and the ones with the sun were pretty good. Strawberry was also nice because of the guy's reaction and the simple bizarreness of it. I liked the cloud one as well, but maybe it could have done without the "I've been holding it in since Texas" line, it feels like it's excessive since the joke is already good without it. The team rocket one was good, but "I hope it turns out to be a scientist or a doctor" felt forced, it's not a thing people say. The mosquito one was meh, I like the idea of mosquitoes spreading diseases with syringes but I feel like it just didn't work. Maybe it was too quick and the sound effect could have been different, because you already used that one. Three-nippled hamster was interesting, but again, there was just no setup.
Bottom line, it's not bad. You have some good ideas for jokes, but you need to give them time and not add extra lines or things that feel off in the dialogue.

Try mirroring your stuff to bit chute also