A stick fight. This time with new themes and an all new narrative.
Thanks for watching my animation. Constructive feedback is much appreciated.
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Very nice
This was something else and you have some really nice animation the characters were really smooth aswell and some nice "ACTION-SCENES" even I really like the action the visual effects were a plus but wouldnt mind even more flashy effects on these especially the action scenes, anyways nice animation here.
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the visual effects were a plus but wouldnt mind even more flashy effects on these especially the action scenes
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Great animation, I felt like the music could be a little more pronounced in some parts. If you have a pretty good collaborative relationship with a pretty good conductor, you can probably make way better videos. I'm just sayin that at times the score could have used more hurumph to drive the animation. THat's where a good working vibe comes into play. You don't just have to animate to the score. Once you've made your piece or even boards, share with whoever is making the music and see if they can tweak some things to flow with the scene. Especially if you know it's really good like this. Just a few nuances to really grab the audience in the action to make it epic. Aye; Wha do I know, just my two cents.
Audio's good, drawings are good, nice work!
I suppose you can never trust brooms.
That's a good lesson to take from this. We are just lucky to have vacuum cleaners here in 2018.
Thanks for the kind words
loved it could use more action though.. longer fight scenes i guess. would love to see in a series.
I'm glad to hear you like it. I Perhaps may use this character again, I was happy with her final design. This animation is a follow up to my other recent animation, the mountain flower, and so I may continue on with more episodes showing more fights taking place over flowers.
Well that broom sure came out of nowhere. :) Really nice fight, with both a nice twist and plenty of variation with the action - though feels strange the main character would show so much emotion during that final scene. After battling the other one so viciously she's suddenly not so vicious anymore. It all changes in those few moments. Seems a bit consistent, and not sure what the motive is, but otherwise this is all great. Really fluent; smooth.
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I'm glad to hear you enjoyed that little twist, and I appreciate the positive feedback.
In regards to her emotion, the witch and pirate responded to the scythe guy mostly out of fear. This is why the witch called her broom and fled. This is also why the pirate snatched a ride on the broom, despite already being in a fight with the witch.
The fight between the witch and the pirate was pretty even, however the scythe guy outmatched either of them.
Hopefully these details hope to explain the emotion I conveyed through the witches face, and also to a degree through the pirates face.