i like the animation, but overall it's not very interesting
During the task one brother gets distracted by personal inhibitions to fight boredom, and ends up coming close to sabotaging the task at hand and companion. Alas reaching reaching his realization by keeping on task.
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i like the animation, but overall it's not very interesting
Art and concept are interesting. The animation is of varying quality. Some parts are nice but I feel like it's mostly choppy. The music is a bit strange and isn't really synced with what's going on. The story is OK, but feels a bit off. i was confused since we never see the bus start to fall or wobble or anything. It just comes out of nowhere. It's also a bit unclear if it was pushed over on purpose. It also just ends before we can see what the little brother is going to do, and he stays weirdly static during that last bit. Try to work on your storytelling and pacing, and don't forget to show that something's going to happen so people don't get confused. Also unclear what the point of te storage box was. i'm guessing he was supposed to put everything in there, but since it cuts off before we see where the little brother's going to put the other bus.
Not bad man xP
I'd recommend maybe higher quality post processing and audio, also voices would be great. I give a generous 4 although I believe this should settle around a 3. Also great use of blur & bounce with the symbols, really engaged me and I lol'd for real :)
Captures the experience of having annoying siblings very well. I found the animation to be quite good for the most part, although I personally wasn't a fan of how they kept distorting up and down during certain sections.