Here is my submission for the Bad Dream Animation Jam.
Poor Jacksie has a bad dream.
Living Nightmare by Snowflake (c) copyright 2016
Licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution (3.0) license.
http://dig.ccmixter.org/files/snowflake/54422
Ft: Blue Wave Theory
https://www.patreon.com/toddcircle
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Subtitles added :-)
Entertaining
Well this was entertaining the character work is pretty good, the "EFFECTS" in the backround are pretty nifty, I think if you added some subtitles in that would be a nice little added feature not needed but would be a nice addition to this fun film of yours.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some added subtitles would be nice.
~X~
Ok thanks :-D
I didn't know subtitles in music videos were a thing so...... subtitles now added
nice song
Not very much animation, but the art is okay. Too centered around the song which has nothing to do with actual bad dreams. Imagery doesn't seem to have much to do with the song. Also, the ending doesn't really seem like it was a bad dream. She was just dreaming about a random person singing about someone she doesn't like. Try to connect more to the theme next time and have less of it be just a barely animated person singing with nothing happening.
Sure, all fair points.
But but but, said random person is her mother and dream imagery was taken from stuff in the room.
A Bad Dream music video! :D Wasn't expecting something like this. Props on a creative idea for the jam, and the music... not bad. The background effects and lighting is great too, and the details like the swinging earring, but the character overall (she's such a highlight too) seems a bit simple. Somewhat flat body and chubby hands...might want to work on that a bit. Everything else: nicely done! With the background especially you really capture the melody/energy somehow.
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Thanks, the flat body was intentional but I do have trouble with hands.
I think this decade has too much of entitled feminist spinsters songs downtrodden beta males.
