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Klariza is a purple girl!
A short adventure of Klariza and Bill.

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The animation was choppy, if what was presented could be considered animation. The music in no real way aided in the visuals. And a story told without words needs to have on-screen cues to aid in viewer understanding of the story (body language, frame setups, ect). I found myself thoroughly confused with what I was watching my the end.
I recommend another try at this same story, but get some more practice under your belt first.

Feels kind of incoherent, and I don't understand what happened in the end. The music, while good, didn't really fit that well. There was basically no real animation, but the art style could work. The story, like I said, is confusing and unclear. A lot of the shots drag on too long. Klariza seems to switch between happy and sad facial expressions in a weird way, like when she's first looking through the window. I guess work on drawing facial expressions. Also, try to practice your animation and try to cut down on shots that are long loops.

Decent animation but for me, the only problem is the music.

AfterlifeAn responds:

Thanks for your comment, i had a doubt: you mean musicalization in the sense that music does not fit with visuals?

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Uploaded
Jun 7, 2018
10:59 AM EDT
Genre
Experimental
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