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Roommates - Pencil Dan

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Nice

So this was pretty good stuff I like this as a series don't know if there is more and like the simplicity of it especially the characters I would even suggest some added detail to the different characters

~X~

That final battle really was something else! :) Feels like the backgrounds are kind of inconsistent (the one with the door and the jar of pencils... compared to everything else), but I guess that kind of goes with the series. Trademark inconsistencies. Always good fun though, keep it going!

-cd-

There's a lot of room for improvement here. Normally I'm fine with simple character designs, but man, most of the characters have the same head and body shape, just with different clothes. A good chunk of the animation was filled with tweens, if you're gonna go with a simple art style at least try to make the animation expressive. Most of the time the hands are just drawn as circles, which looks pretty lazy, and even when there is fingers they look really sloppy.The writing and humor wasn't terrible, but it wasn't that great either. A lot of the jokes just come from characters screaming which gets annoying fast, and the story isn't really interesting. The fight scene did look really nice, props to the guy who did that. You seem like you have a good amount of potential and I can appreciate the fact that you did a whole 11 minute cartoon, but you gotta work on your stuff more.

couldnt get past 2 minutes with all the shouting. learn about compressors,

lol ed edd n eddy sound effects

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May 26, 2018
11:16 AM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place May 27, 2018