It's really hard to grasp what you wanted to say with this piece. Everything felt meaningless or has lack of a meaning. What was the point of Jen's character or her journey? What was the point of anything? To keep moving forward? But then to where? An abrupt ending to Kim's plot? I never think it's enough to show some cool art or a cool visual if you don't also show yourself. 10 out of 10 good job!!!