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A Child's Dream

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"A Child's Dream" is an animation project of mine and it's the first animation I've ever made! Hope you enjoy it and feel free to leave feedback!

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Good work overall. Movement animations could use a bit more work though. Mainly in syncing walking or running animations with the speed the character is moving. By this I mean how the feet kind of skate or slip on the ground as it were as they move.

Solid work, animation is a bit choppy but I think practice will help you over come that. Also, I loved slight use of symbolism of self actualization at the end. If i may be so bold, If you do another project involving dreams and dream imagery I would recommend you read some of the works of Carl Jung; I think it may help inspire some more great animation.

Once again, Great work.

TaraFlorine responds:

Thank you for your feedback, I'll definitely check that out!

The still art looks good, the backgrounds are quite solid, however I think there is a bit of a disconnect between those and the animations. A bit more shading might help, but also some of the walking seems slower than the legs moving, so that's an area to look at improving on.

You might benefit from having some sound effects when running through things, like the grass, or simple rabbit noises, just little things that will add to the overall feeling of the animation. Otherwise, it's a good start, and with practice, you should get better!

3/5

<3

TaraFlorine responds:

Thank you for your feedback! I totally understand what you mean haha, I'll work on that!

Maybe you could change the running angel to give it a more 3d feel. the animation was not bad. Keep it up!

TaraFlorine responds:

I'll take a look at that, thank you!