hahaha nice
The stubbornness of others can be a metaphorical, and literal roadblock. Here is an animated short from my second semester, during Junior year at the School of Visual Arts.
hahaha nice
Clean animation, nice voice acting and pretty funny from my stand point. This is really good
Great work. Nice smooth animations, which also have their own sense of comedy that fits the subject matter. Having both comedic and polished animations is a hard thing to balance. The whole has a very nice consistent level quality to it. The simplistic, thick lined designs read and animate really well. While the subject matter was funny it was also kinda generic, any two characters could be saying this to each other.
Hey! I appreciate the feedback :) I agree that the exchange didn't represent these characters as individuals very much, but I'll be working on better writing for the future lol
lol
Well what Can I say about this it was very amusing and very entertaining, really really short though this was funny and gave me a good laugh and such you really made for some good humor but again this was just a very short animation and I could see you doing more with it maybe new scenes and such.
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Well for sure needs more animation, more scenes more flow of this so it flows like an animation but you still have a nice idea here, So while you do have an entertaining short here it seems too short, maybe havving some other shorts along with it, or make the existing one longer with much more depth. give it a try it cant hurt and im pretty sure your fans will enjoy it alot more. just something to think about.
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Thanks for the advice :) I agree it is too short. There hasn't been much of a response to this video until I uploaded it to NG. So fleshing out / making a sequel for these guys may happen after all
Well... maybe he is? XD In the end we never really get an answer! But the animation was awesome. Love the style and fluidity of it all. Short but impressively flawless.
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Thank you!!