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THE TIME MACHINE

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Hi! Not bad, I'm not seeing any others on your profile so I'll assume this is your first stop motion. All the fundamentals are here, and are good enough to be passable. A few extra movement frames would add a little more smoothness to the animation. The sound quality was good as well, no audible pops or distortion.

I will say to be cautious when filming around props, because movement of things which aren't supposed to be the focus draws the eye away from the subject. Humans are great at detecting peripheral movement, so when you put the blue clay on the yankee candle to hide the label, you also slightly moved the candle itself. I went back to see where I'd seen other movement. The curtains as well, which I don't know was due to an open window or how you moved around to set everything up. Just something to keep in mind as you keep at it.

cerridwen1313 responds:

Yea I will improve my clay mation (this was not my first clay annimation, its just my first annimation that was posted to newgrounds) and im making more right now :)

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May 13, 2018
3:29 PM EDT