Interesting
So this was a nice "CONCEPT" the black and white style is ok I would suggest doing this in color, and more scripted scenes everything with the camera seems to be kind of wild, but other then that you do have a nice film here and I like what you have presented hope to see more from you sometime soon.
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the black and white style is ok I would suggest doing this in color, and more scripted scenes everything with the camera seems to be kind of wild
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