Punal The Adventure

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Short Visual Novel where we need to help a little female whale that looks for his mother. We need to trust or not the different characters that we meet, also believe in her.

Indie Game created by @noisechip.

Updates :
- Sound bug fixed ( Audio plays with WebGL )
- Custom cursor added

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So this was actually notbad and kind of fun it was a nifty little game you have here I do think you could ad to this game with more improved graphics and even the story could be a little deeper now don't get me wrong this was a good game I like the depth of it but wish there was more so simple is good but even more depth would improve on this a lot nice effort for sure

As suggested more depth in story and deeper graphics


GameDanTeam responds:

Thank you for your comments.
You are right, graphics and story could be better, our new visual novels are better than this one.
We are improving step by step, we hope you'll like our future works.
Thank you.

It's nice but pretty small, the wrong choices result in an quick and simple ending rather than it being more subtle.

GameDanTeam responds:

Thank you for your review.
The script is pretty basic, it was a project done very fast, only four days.

We'll work to create better games in future.

Thank you.

There's no sound. The graphics are OK, but too repetitive. The game is way shorter than I expected and there's only one good ending. Effectively a stranger danger game, but it was immediately obvious what you were supposed to pick. Nothing really too interesting about it. I guess next time add more options, some sound and maybe more interesting graphics.

GameDanTeam responds:

Thank you for give your opinion.
-The sound bug is fixed, with WebGL you can listen the music.
-The game was done in 4 days by only one person so use the graphics to "repeat" scenes was a way to finish the game faster.
-We appreciate your comments about the script.

We are working in more games, also some of them are finished and need to be published, are available to play online in our web.

Thank you for your time writing this review, we hope that our future work will please you more than this game.

Credits & Info

2.75 / 5.00

May 13, 2018
2:49 AM EDT
Adventure - Other