really good so far
You made everyone 18? Seems like kind of a pussy-out for someone who included pissplay and incest.
So I found this game from spoilers on an image board... and I'm looking at it. Objectively, as a game, I feel it fits the tone of the source material. the only major thing I noticed was that some dialogue was being said by other characters, instead of the proper ones, if that makes any sense.
Well i might has scored higher but your pc version link has scene spoilers and that nerfed my experience