This was cool
I am really in love with the kirby "VOICE" you did very well here and made it work, some areas you can really push it a bit more but for what it is this was really nice work, also adding more emotion would be a plus on some elements here, anyways nice work hope to see more.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Would love to see more of these maybe even longer.
Kirby voice is so Cute :P