Game has good art and is overproduced, which is a nice thing to say about a game but unfortunately doesn't induce enjoyment for the player. "morning again? I guess i'd better go to the restaraunt" is unnecessary and detracts from core gameplay. Just remove it from the game, or have it be lightning fast (both options are fine with me). Dialogue is slow in general, not unenjoyable, but it slows down the game and ruins replayability which should be a serious concern for a game with multiple endings. Like do you really want all the art that you put into the intro to be only seen once? None of these things is unsolvable but as is there's a lot of missed potential here.
Edit: How exactly am I supposed to discover the control hotkey? I'm keeping this review as it is just b/c the updated version is more complete, and I played maybe a day and a half in this version.