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Hey guys! Here's a little horror short film I made - it features a fully animated CG monster. Looking forward to hearing what you all think.

Check me out on instagrandpa if you want to see behind the scenes stuff on future films and other art! instagram.com/ramadogs/

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Nice

So you have brought in some nifty designs and some tasty flavors, and that sort of reminded me of a wine testing contest with all the flavors you had in here. you made this kind of scary and this was just more entertaining then anything else, so props to you on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some flashy effects for sure.

~X~

The circling around was a little too long, the monster reveal was really disappointing. Other than that, good job!

MiddleFingerRings responds:

Thanks!

Haha!, the monster is very funny xD.

MiddleFingerRings responds:

Good to hear.

The build up was ok, even if a little slow (why didn't he just push the chair?). Having more glimpses of awkward or unnerving elements would've added to the overall atmosphere. Or having the actor finally relax before the thing got him.

The monster's appearance and how it got closer to the camera was good, I liked it. However, the whole "eating your head" thing completely disrupts the atmosphere and was unnecesary, in my opinion. Just my two cents.

MiddleFingerRings responds:

Thanks dude!

Lol dkm

Great overall anticipation with the audio and shots.
The initial death scene and first monster appearance could be improved, if you were aiming for "scary". I found the last 25 seconds of the film to be more comedic than scary.
The 3D model(s) looked alright.

Good job!

MiddleFingerRings responds:

That's cool, it's meant to be scary but not taking itself too seriously. :)

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