So I give the animation two thumbs up. The mixing of 2D and 3D assets was at times fairly rough but overall the illusion of space was well executed. The 2D animation of the MC himself was actually pretty good. Bravo.
The audio had a fairly substantial amount of clipping, and during the dogfight the distortion in the audio was simply too much. Borderline distracting.
The story had a wonderful monologue. But the change in tempo had no real preliminary hint it would come to that and therefore seemed wildly out of place. I found it to be wildly different from what the opening seemed to be alluding to and personally found it not for the better.
Overall not bad. But you gotta work on pacing a bit. And audio.