Ahhh... Time to talk like human ...

I want to make some action strategy with little funny animation where 1 (God-like)people fight against nature and a lot of enemies with the brain.
He is trying to grow himself by does everything to achieve goal.
And his highest goal is to have high-technology enough to get out from the world to expand more planet with next series.

But there is a problem for me to make...
1.Not so smart to think smart plot which I try the best to do.
2.English is not my native language so full of grammar mistake even this Full Description
3.No voice actor yet
4.Slow and suckass drawing skill

Anyway, this video is about rescue people...
The second dimension has been open by him
So new human-like animal type called Furnimal (Human World )or Malino(Malino World) come to earth
and have the relationship with the human but some human see them as a toy so they torture them for fun.

This video also has a problem that I found
1.The stupid blue text box that I thought it was a good idea
2.Grammar Mistake
3.Too much text...
4.Repeat the same scene too frequent
5.No Dub

What do you think please tell me
It will help me improve a lot
Thx