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Technical : Pretty Blood EP A1

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Ahhh... Time to talk like human ...

I want to make some action strategy with little funny animation where 1 (God-like)people fight against nature and a lot of enemies with the brain.
He is trying to grow himself by does everything to achieve goal.
And his highest goal is to have high-technology enough to get out from the world to expand more planet with next series.

But there is a problem for me to make...
1.Not so smart to think smart plot which I try the best to do.
2.English is not my native language so full of grammar mistake even this Full Description
3.No voice actor yet
4.Slow and suckass drawing skill

Anyway, this video is about rescue people...
The second dimension has been open by him
So new human-like animal type called Furnimal (Human World )or Malino(Malino World) come to earth
and have the relationship with the human but some human see them as a toy so they torture them for fun.

This video also has a problem that I found
1.The stupid blue text box that I thought it was a good idea
2.Grammar Mistake
3.Too much text...
4.Repeat the same scene too frequent
5.No Dub

What do you think please tell me
It will help me improve a lot

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I have no I idea who I should be rooting for

Not to be a jerk or anything but I noticed something. The operator guy’s eyes are derpy but hey I know the series itself isn’t perfect but you are improving everyday. I noticed it and I decided to point it out. I do have other ideas of torture for future videos. I would recommend the rack and other torture devices. But I would recommend if you look up the torture devices first and find one that fits for you.

i have a soft spot for lance

holy moly, this really expanded on the story of the series and made it a lot more gripping. I am super curious to see how this plays out. the characters make sense, they have more of a backstory, the text boxes though not the best solution is wayyy better than guessing what each character is saying and yeah again translation issues but overall super Good. a small detail is that the names of the species furnamals was changed which seemed random