Another entertaining piece here very fun to see all the elements and animation that takes place theres even a small story that takes place in these ones very fun indeed to watch and review these so nice work indeed, And I look forward to even more from you, So The Starting sequence in this, is great infact I love how you start this off and finish it with a bang, it is not the most oerfect of submissions but you put alot of effort into this and it shows, So I say this has some good heart about it, Now the ideas is to advance on some new and improved ideas that can make it shine. the ideas are Enhanced on this flash, But overall I found this pretty good so hope to see more work soon. My Prospective on this it was something differant and nifty. dont forget to Finalize this flash with some of the ideas sugested. these are all on white paper have you thaught about changing up the paper and backround anyways nice work here.
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these are all on white paper have you thaught about changing up the paper and backround