An amazing entry you have a good style here you have some nice flow of animation and it all seems to flow very well as for a story its ok but could be better but I still like this and love how all the characters just enjoying there fun here so nice job indeed, hope you keep making more stuff like this. How to start off this review of this interesting yet mystery of a flash here, you have alot going on here, some stuff I was not on par with but its how it was presented so you do have something decent here and I quite enjoyed what you have presented, you have done a Wonderfully and Enticing job here and glad I found this Discovery of a flash, good job. And that was that the ending was good as we do come to the ending of this and the submission I was more impressed with how you ended it so good job there and hope to see more of your interesting and entertaining work.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more of these