Not bad! I hope you will continue this story.
a brief animation, about a bad boy with a goal, destroy his enemies and save his friends ------- chapter 1
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Not bad! I hope you will continue this story.
Cool! Has a great style! It could have more.
Great stuff, I'll just start with the criticism first to get it outta the way. Firstly, I noticed that the character's expressions could've been a little more emotive, and a lot of the line art of the characters were very rigid, take for example the part where the boy points the gun at the other guy, the barrel of the gun is more of a hexagonal shape than a circular shape.
Overall it's pretty decently animated, sound effects are pretty solid in the whole thing, just in general a really nice smooth animation.
Thank you very much, I will keep it in mind to improve in future animations
Greetings :D