Destroyer837 there's no solution
Author Comments
First i must warn you this game can make you crazy.It's hard to finish alive.You will die really a lot time.But dont give up... This is my second game and hope you guys like this story...
Reviews
AdventVoice I love puzzle games that have stories worth their salt. But you are hard to satisfy you know.
Nothing ever makes you happy and when I try to make myself happy I am shot. Not Cool. LOL
NiobiuMmm responds:
Thanks for comment. I just try to create a really hard text based game and its my second try. Some of people like others not. Even little part of them hate. But in the end im glad reach almost 15k people and still have 3 stars. Who knows maybe in future after fix some problems in private life more cool games and better games might come.
Fenir I want to like this game, I really do, but as is the best I can give it is no rating.
Text based adventures are possibly my favorite genre, but I just can't get involved in this story. Don't get me wrong, the content itself has potential, but the amount of errors in the text was so jarring that it kept drawing me out of it. Is English perhaps not your first language? I suspect that may be the case, and that's fine. However, you have interesting ideas, do yourself a favor and in the future get someone to proofread your text so that others can fully enjoy and explore them :). Everyone making a text based game should have proofreaders ^.^.
Have a great day.
xAyjAy No matter what I chose, the old soldier dies...wait until the bad guy shows up, pick any choices: death. Get to the police station after killing the kidnappers, then talk to the bad guy and chose something: death.
Honestly, this is pretty bad. The choices seem forced and robotic. There's not enough backstory to feel anything for the protagonist. The grammar is atrocious. If you're gonna make a text-based adventure you gotta at least get the grammar at a decent level. Reading through the dialogue at times feels like reading a super cheesy novel written by a 13-year-old. Don't get me wrong there is potential but there needs to be a lot of polishing. The music and sound effects were really well done tho so I'd give that category a full score.
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3.02 / 5.00
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Frontpaged February 1, 2018
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