It's not horrible. However, the bad grammar really makes it hard for me to concentrate, and I don't really care for the main character. It started abruptly, which isn't always a bad thing, but there was no real reason for me to like the character.
I want to like this game, I really do, but as is the best I can give it is no rating.
Text based adventures are possibly my favorite genre, but I just can't get involved in this story. Don't get me wrong, the content itself has potential, but the amount of errors in the text was so jarring that it kept drawing me out of it. Is English perhaps not your first language? I suspect that may be the case, and that's fine. However, you have interesting ideas, do yourself a favor and in the future get someone to proofread your text so that others can fully enjoy and explore them :). Everyone making a text based game should have proofreaders ^.^.
Have a great day.
No matter what I chose, the old soldier dies...wait until the bad guy shows up, pick any choices: death. Get to the police station after killing the kidnappers, then talk to the bad guy and chose something: death.
Honestly, this is pretty bad. The choices seem forced and robotic. There's not enough backstory to feel anything for the protagonist. The grammar is atrocious. If you're gonna make a text-based adventure you gotta at least get the grammar at a decent level. Reading through the dialogue at times feels like reading a super cheesy novel written by a 13-year-old. Don't get me wrong there is potential but there needs to be a lot of polishing. The music and sound effects were really well done tho so I'd give that category a full score.
This game is 10/10. is so hard like Dark Soul.
Yea im kinda fan games like that much hard and i think like why this one cant be :D