The guy below me is a twat.
What he means to say is "HE" doesn't think it's comedy and "HE" doesn't understand it.
To "ME" I found this highly entertaining & comedic. Don't get me wrong, I wasn't giggling like a school girl - but you had my eyes glued to the screen the entire time anticipating what was to happen next.
For old mate zed617 to grab the genre of the cartoon labelled by Newgrounds category and go for a rampage claiming he could write it better in itself is a joke. So maybe he's got me there. ;)
Overall my only quam with the toon was the long texted intro which I will admit immediately skipped. (Sorry)
Visuals and flow of animation were top tier and I anticipate your future work. Thank you for sharing!