well...
i'd pretty much have to agree with the guy before me. cool graphics too
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For one of my assignments I had to plan a business around the subject of computers and create a presentation for it.
Although this isn't the actual presentation, this is the intro for it that I did. I know its a bit rough around the edges but I was quite proud of it regardless as I haven't done any flash for a long time.
I tried to keep the file size down, so the quality of the sound and graphics are a bit iffy... but give me your opinions anyway.
Thanks,
Paul J
*EDITED After reading reviews*
Sorry, I should of pointed out this isn't aimed at the 12 year old kids that wanted to see some soft porn, some stick men fighting or abusive language...
I only entered this to this site, coz Its the only 'flash rating' site I know and wanted some feedback... not on how funny or entertaining it is, but simply how it measures up for what its supposed to be... a Intro to a fictional firm... If you want to be entertained with humourus dialogue why are you even looking at it?
Thanks,
P.S cheers for the feedback
EDIT - Oops just realised my film is only 500 wide yet I set in NG portal it as 550 wide... thats why it wasn't displaying 100% correct...
Ok...
This sux! Get to get something cool!!! Just kidding, dont get mad and say me that im a 14 year old kid cause im not! Lol...ok, ok, Ill get serious. Nice work, Excellent work I could say, still, its a little bit boring, but for a commercial is great, try selling this idea to Microsoft for their next E-product!
Keep the good work.
WHAT?!? WHERE ARE THE BOOBS?!?
Just kidding...
Good job, looks great. Very creative, and gets the point across. If I owned a busniess i would be glad to use this.
cool
not bad, but was confused cause no real story just some type of advertisment but the graphics were interesting, and well done, would love a story though...
ok
This did look nice, decent for a business presentation intro. However, I think the intro is a bit long and dragged out. It's okay for it to be shorter as the beginning to something bigger. I'd like to see what the main part, or your actual presentation is. To make it less boring, try add some animated designs, rather than just animated text.
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