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The Powerhouse (Pilot)

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Basic info: This is the first animation I ever made. Of course its not the best but i think I have room to improve. Please give me feedback to let me know what I could do to improve. I am planning on doing a series of 3 to 5 minute episodes. I also made the time stop sound effect if anyone was wondering (Yes it is based on the JoJo one).

Plot: An army of killer robots is terrorizing the world by taking as many teenagers as possible and killing everyone else. They have been created by an evil mastermind who wants to create an even stronger army of super soldiers. The story follows a young teen named Peter who gets kidnapped and is given the power to manipulate time. He realizes that there are more like him when he encounters someone with super strength and finds out that there is a whole world where people like him live. Just who is this evil man, what kind of power does he have, and where did he come from?

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I can't draw so this looks great to me, also you can thank Cero's song for me finding this!

Good. The animation is okay, and everything else is fine. Maybe just work on the plot a little bit. It has a lot of potential

SpartanlordPDG responds:

Thanks! I will work on my animation skill and the plot will thicken later :)

Work on writing, it will make your other aspects’ faults seem smaller. Music worked well, but the animation was as you put it, not the best.

SpartanlordPDG responds:

Thanks for the feedback, I will admit that I kinda messed up with the fps and animation but I will try to work on it! I agree that the writing could use some work too.

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Uploaded
Jan 7, 2018
9:41 PM EST
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