Im really sorry but this is awful, first you need to improve by adding tests to the portal (dump grounds) You need to animate atleast for 3 months to submiss something like that.

THE SECOND: Is the submission itself, it is for your first animation not bad but the storyline is wierd. Because series need some storyline, and this doesnt. Backgrounds were simple from Krinkels, but youre novice so i will place that as nothing only as advice.

Half of the star given by vcam and some work. Hint: try to use tween for vcam, it is a lot better.

What the f.. okey what is this, everything is wrong here like everything missing SFX and just... just dont post it as portal post it in dump

No.

i didnt know what was happening. at all. improve. ALOT.

I felt like watching a storyboard without story.