5 stars just for the credits
Horrible sounds. Jack is fucking with Ashi, but you made it sounds like she's made of jelly.
Pretty good animation but really it's better with the sound off. Either try to do it well or don't do it at all.
Overall, its not bad, but not great either. I don't really mind the unsynced audio but what hits me the most is the inconsistent anatomy.
Love it amazing job you did and I love how it looks^^