Now in all honestly, most of the time, script and text based games become boring, having very little variety in them once you go through the initial base tutorial that sets up the game that you have in mind. Now, for the most part it was okay, simple but okay. Not outstanding, not bad, just.. Like bland and vanilla. The scenario could use some work as well as the backstory, sure becoming the head guy and then slowly seducing your underlings is something that is as old as time for these sorts of things.
Never let yourself give up on this though, you have a good base system set up, but adding more text with little to no sound or even noises doesn't help set up the atmosphere you're trying to convey. If you need help, never forget that you can ask from those that you've most likely done the same things you're doing.
Goes out of memory to quickly to do anything significant and honestly this game is not good at catching ones attention. The pure novel style is like reading a book. A mediocre one. Maybe add at least faces for everyone you're talking to next to the text wall. Would at least help to get into the game as you feel more in the world instead of just having a wall of text.