Really good for a first sub, don't get me wrong. I'll say good job now, but this is just not a submittable piece. It's too short. With that said, your animating skills are fucking fantastic, so I'm really excited to see what your first full submission looks like. You keep at it and you could be running this site with your content.

Pretty nice, considering this is your first animation!

Keep practicing, and you will become even better!

It's simple, but well animated. I also like how it's a silhouette. very cool.

I love me some Pivot animations. This was well done and seems to tell the story you wanted to tell, thanks for sharing.