Would love to see more of your work , this was awesome
I love the creative introduction. The leg work is pretty nice too, the eye movement seems a bit too wonky though. They are synced to the movement and it feels silly to a small degree. Exceptionally nice mouth movement, the way Black Fire's body is drawn is also nicely done.
The second scene is a really good angle , but the body position itself mainly with the upper region looks very hung out. That is more so in terms of the head and the neck, feels a little too long. The detail in the penis is extremely nice too. The penetration loop is on point, maybe let the thrust send the fluids in more directions with a bit of a longer fall.
Cute voices too!
not bad, keep it up.
Niiiice, pretty good animation and spot on sound; voice acting on Star and Black are bit softer than normal, but other than that it's sweet.