The animation was ok. The words at the end went by too fast to read. Never write words, always use a font, since handwriting can be sloppy. There's no story here, so I voted low, but I think you'll do good some day, if you keep at it.
This is my first animation short featuring a human being. The animation might be a bit cricket. The short is mainly about a girl drinking a potion and suddenly disappear.
The animation was ok. The words at the end went by too fast to read. Never write words, always use a font, since handwriting can be sloppy. There's no story here, so I voted low, but I think you'll do good some day, if you keep at it.