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Showing off my oc Nion. Part of a larger product coming later.

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Alright stiff and choppy a little this is. I agree with the below here and offer that the forums here on NG can be a source of wisdom for you. Don't get discouraged and ask questions, especially from more experienced animators. You're starting with sticks, I'd recommend going to Stick Page or Hyune's Dojo for more stick animators who may be able to offer great insight to you on your animations and how best to improve. POV Ray tracer might be of use to you. There are others out there that are free. I suggest asking around for which might be cool good or worthless as an unflushed piece of crap. Avoid those, Lol. Keep trying and hey you will get there.

DeviaAnims responds:

I thank you! I'll keep that in mind, thank you!

I imagine this is one of your first attempts in animation, so I will treat it as such. Movement seemed a little to stiff. I suggest you look up the 12 principles of animation, study does and apply them to your next work.

Keep practicing, I started out just like you a long time ago.

DeviaAnims responds:

You're correct to assume that this is my first animation, hopefully in a long line of work and dedication. Thank you for the feedback, I'll try to improve. Happy to see others who started like me.

Nice work dude!

DeviaAnims responds:

Thank you!

The overall video was meh.
I like the sound effects and the timing on it was good.

BUT

To make your animations more unique and more professional, you should get Adobe Animate
for 20 dollars a month its definitely worth the price. And maybe get some voice acting involved!

From
Animator9

DeviaAnims responds:

I thank you for your feedback! Sorry, I'm a tad poor... I use Stick nodes pro, for $3 something as a one time payment.

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