That's my boy Tyler! Can't wait to see all the great ideas of yours come to life!

i can tell you put effort into this.
and i could see you becoming pretty good at this but you really need to put you nose to the grind stone and work your tail off.

the general premise is... well ... not really funny.... relate-able sure. but i dont think thats enough on its own to carry a short. nor is relate-ability a joke on its on.

in general comedy is hard to critcize because its so subjective so take that witha grain of salt.

i would say put abit more effort into the actual animation... your drawings are passable, but i feel the lazy animation isn't doing you any favors and gets downright distracting.

the rule of thumb would be. if you have good writing or jokes you could get away with poor animation.
if you had good animation and poor writing... while it wouldn't be entertaining it would have merit from a technical standpoint... not to mention technical skill will come in handy with collaborations which naturally yield better project results.

Best of luck! keep at it!