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Sarah Thinks (Demo) 0.1

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demo of "Sarah thinks" is a short teaser, for my future visual novel. That, i am currently creating


travel in the thoughts of Sarah, a hopeless damsel in distress.
get to know her, as the story progresses.


(again W.I.P) - short teaser.
(intro)

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"Knees weak arms are heavy !"
-Eminem (8 mile)

"Knees become weak arms become heavy"
-Sarah
This line got me good XD

I would actually prefer if you could skip the dialogues that appear in a typed fashion just by clicking once to get to the end of the text. So that we could just read the sentence at once instead of waiting for the whole sequence to appear letter by letter, just saying it could optional.

People who prefer to read can read it as it comes, and people who can't wait can click to skip the animation.

Also when i clicked on skip once or maybe twice everything appeared soo fast and i couldn't read or see anything and it came back to the main menu.
I thought the skip button was for to skip an exchange.

I really loved the visuals especially the anime character "Sarah" was stunningly well designed.
Also the expressions looked really cool.
The sound track was a good choice for this Visual novel.

I really hope you come up with a better name for this, Sarah thinks is not good enough in my opinion!
Again just saying, please talk about it a bunch of people and ask their opinions.
I wouldn't want a great game like this have a boring name.

Can't wait to see how it turns out.
Well done and Good luck !

CloudKnight responds:

thank you so much! your kind words and criticisms, i will take into concideration. this project is currently in it's rough stages and soon to be completed, edited and then put threw the polishing phase! much more work to be done. i appreciate you checking it out and hope you will be able to enjoy the finished project as soon as it's released !

You know I really don't like visual novels, but that intro made me change my mind. Great graphics, good idea of story - just great work! I'm waiting for full version.

P.S. English isn't my first language.

CloudKnight responds:

thank you so much ! don't worry the full version is being worked on and will be out soon!

Wow nice, music really gives the game the sad kinda feel.
I know its a demo but its really short for a demo.

CloudKnight responds:

Appreciate the review, again i apologize on the length.
once i figure out more so the plans for the game.
i will most certainly expand the demo! in a newer version perhaps.

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Nov 17, 2017
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