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OH MY GOD - PART I

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This was my 4th animation ever made. Join God and the Devil on his journey all across the afterlife to find a way to earn back the faith of the people, from heaven to hell and everything in between!!!

IMPORTANT INFO: I've finished this animation a year ago, it took me 8 months to do it, now that I look back to it I can see at least 2 things I would definetly do different now and I wanted to share them with you, I'm a bad salesman.
My voice acting wasn't the best, but it gets better as the animation goes forward and there are some pacing issues, specially in the beginning, there where so many things I wanted to explain to begin the story that I couldn't find the way to do it differently.
If you get past this I believe you can enjoy what I've done.

I would love to hear your thoughts about it, please let me know.

One last thing, because the full animation is so long I couldn't uploaded all at ones here in NG, so I split it into 2 parts.
I'm uploading part 2 right away or you can see the full video on my youtube channel here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MrFceFlGuU4

Thanks again everyone!!! Have great one!

Jack DiMaze

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Awesome job man. I do agree however that the voice acting needs polish. ;)

not enough difference in vocal tone and there is that pesky odd syllable stressing.

still, great job.

OblitusCS responds:

Hey thanks for taking the time to watch this. Yes I know, because of the lack of experiece at that moment I was feeling kinda shy while recording, hopefully I'm getting better now.
Thanks again for watching and taking the time to comment, have a great day my friend!!!

Oh man, this was awesome! XD Love their personalities! And that you didn't stress the pace either, nor the details. The way the sun rays play behind the pillars, and the heavenly kingdom is presented, and God sitting in the bathroom... all of it feels polished to the point of perfection! Jesus Christ made an entertaining cameo too, and the story, that there needs to be a balance between the two worlds, it makes for a pretty epic tale to back up the comedy! About to head over to the second part soon and see how it fares there, though considering how much backstory there is it feels strange it'd be possible to end properly with just two parts...

As for the'defects' you mention: I don't think the pacing is bad at all, I feel like it lets you really savor the details, and the journey, though I do agree about the voice acting. If not else it feels like it'd add a lot with some characters voiced by someone else, so you can really differentiate between them, but at least having both God/the Devil voiced by the same guy, just with the same tone, that works perfectly. :)

Awesome work so far; onto the next!

-cd-

OblitusCS responds:

Hey!!! good to hear from you!!! I can't thank you enough for this, I was hoping for at least one person to appreciate all the work I put into this and here you are.
I had some doubt with the pacing because it doesn't fit the way most people do animations now, which is short, fast and straight to the point. With this one you have to relax, pay attention and get yourself inmerse in the world, I know most people won't do that but I'm glad that you did.
As for the voice acting, although I feel like now I'm getting better with it, I'll definetly use other voice actors in the future, anything to improve the overall watching experience.
Thanks again man, I'm checking your opinion on part 2 now, see you there.

This better make the Front Page! DMAN! 30 minutes of animation, you are an FN Stud!

OblitusCS responds:

Hahaha Thanks a lot man!!!

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