Dear Diary v0.0.1 by the Andras Nest

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Project Link: www.patreon.com/andrasnest

WARNING: This game is in a pre-alpha state. First released version ever, so it could totally trigger some bugs. Please, if you find some bugs report that!!!

INFO:The Main Character after a car crash loses the full control of his body, in a fight between life and death he find himself in a mysterious place surrounded by snow, with a strange hooded girl... he will make the deal that will change his life forever.

I Hope you all will like it.

I***t (s*n/m*r, b*r/s*s, etc.)
Group sex (MMF, MFF and more)
BDSM (spanking, bondage, etc)


For a Pre-Alpha its not that bad. Here are some quick bugs I've noticed (perhaps some were mentioned already):
- Sometimes you go to bed and the player's mother wakes him up when its still dark. It happened to me starting the day 7.
- Money doesn't seem to increase, perhaps its just the lemonade job has the text info but no money is increasing on the character.
- Sometimes you may find the mother's sprite going to wake you up, while on the shower you see that she is there for peeking up.
- I was able to Peek at the teacher, although the message said that I got a video, its not seen in the inventory, nor anything.
- Watching TV with the sister did not increase any relationship at all.

Since its Pre-Alpha, it is possible that some may be added in the future, but just in case here are some quick suggestions:
- By paying $15 per class, the character may be able to build up his strength by swimming (the sprite could automatically go from one end of the pool to another). This could also increase relationship with the lifesaver.
- Clicking on the axe on the backyard, the character could increase the relationship with Mom, along with some Strenght a little bit.
- Perhaps having a check list of people to spy (or spied, and where) could help.
- I believe that more residential buildings could increase the chance of the character triggering some sex scenes by looking at the window from outside. This is not necessary a map per house, but more sprites with houses and windows. I believe this may work at the character's neighbor.
- By going to the club at night could increase some charisma or charm. If the character talked to at least 3 people per day he could maintain it, if talked to more than 6, perhaps increase it (The only real way to be more sociable with strangers is by talking, not by playing games or staying at home).

So far, this is what came to my mind. I know you may have your many projects and ideas, but I shared some I'm expecting or hoping to see in case these help.

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there is a lot of glitches can u fix them i got into a glitch loop with the bullies and it remaining night after a few days like you get woken up when its night the lemonade stand u should get money but a glitch prevents it

AndrasNest responds:

All fixed for the new version

Please add some way to reduce lag like, reduce effects or something.

AndrasNest responds:

In what place are you experiencing lag?

i got a bug then i wake up the night animation dose not work (mom wakening u up )

Love the idea, it should be rewarding. however these are a few notes, not sure the Artist is aware of:

1- during all meal times: talk to mom, sister pic and dialog shows up. Lunch time: dialog says eat lunch. when done eating, main guy says dinner. - Maybe have the time thing on the top right say noon during lunch time? Also lunch is spelled wrong.
2- In clothing store, can walk through the LHS hanger into the wall (North wall)
3- hospital: stairs lead to walk on walls.
4- Selling the lemonade gives no cash - making it very tedious to hit the $100 mark. I gave up and quit after 1 week with $30
5- Evening time: shows as sunny - If you skip the meal and go out.
6- On Tuesday (1st week): if you refuse to help the vendor, his pic is stuck on the screen. Had to speak with baywatch to have it go away. Not sure if only tuesday..
7- Nurse Madia is a no show on weekends, all days
8- on friday night: Try to sleep, mom scene ends, then it still says friday night. only way to get past it is to do something that passes time.
9- cut scenes could be smoother and maybe with sound.

Seems like a great project, would have loved to see the final product; all the best!

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2.04 / 5.00

Nov 14, 2017
1:01 PM EST
Adventure - RPG