How did this get onto newgrounds?
just a slideshow loop with a sound file playing
the images were humorously edited but im probably spending longer reviewing this than it took to make this
Hmm this was interesting
Heh ok this was kinda funny it was more of an "INTRO" then anythingelse, and this was actually funny though but it was on a loop over and over and while that was funny thats all it was, the audio helped with the humor, now i do understand it was also older flash from years ago, but maybe some effort for improvment would be to have that intro then some sorta actualy story to go with it, just a thought anyways, the images were kind of entertaining though, it didnt much make sense either but like i said it was amusing and i got a few laughs out of it, as im sure some did, but in the end it needs more depth more content and story.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested above, improvment would be to have that intro then some sorta actualy story to go with it, it needs more depth more content and story.
Funny and cute and more of an intro then anything else.
what is this?
All I'm getting is a repetitive loop, with an ok song and an inaudible voice. This is barely a flash, no effort went into this, and its basically a waste of time. You really need to layout some form of storyline ahead of time if you expect to make an effective flash.
I mean literally, the advertisments were longer then the "intro" if you can call one frame of poor gif modification an intro. The Coors thing was kind of interesting, but you had to go and mess that up by not having any created graphics or any animation whatsoever in this flash, as well as no background. I can't really say I liked anything in this flash. The song was cool, but it didn't really fit with this flash. This is one of those that you have to start over completely to fix.