Ok, so I'm really late but meh... So, first of all, good job you guys! Have been looking forward to that animation. And now I know what am I looking forward to and I can tell already it is gonna be ineresting :)
I feel like the voice acting is out of place a little (too early or too late on some parts) and the music could be a tinsey-winsey bit louder but still that was pretty good, you got me hooked :)
Animation is very nice, keep that up!

WOW!!! Amazing artwork! The ending gives a sense of panic, exactly what I thought of when writing about the fume-zombies. The gas mask is such a great imagery of that feeling of death being one breathe away. Good job on the voice acting and sound effects.

Nice work guys

It has that pretty impressive display to it. The sounds, and background music, along with the parchment-like paper background. But, the voice isn't exactly the best, unfortunately. It's something with the mic a bit. It gives out that echo-ish feeling. But, other than that, I am completely looking forward to this animation.

Not much of action here but count me looking forward for the next part