> 2017
> Me Gusta face
Pick one.
Don't worry better animations coming soon.
When Jeff the nooby pokemon trainer tries to catch his first pokemon chaos follows.
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BTW this was originally made for youtube, so maybe that explains the endscreen.
> 2017
> Me Gusta face
Pick one.
Not terrible for first attempt, but here is my critique,
For starters, everything looks out of resolution, how ever you got your sprites they are not a source to be used again, it makes everything look blurry and make added in objects look out of place.
Secondly, if you have a mic, you can voice act. At least enough to make something like this, I can understand wanting more voice actors but you must not give up without trying.
Lastly, I will input my nit-picks:
Ash/Jeff's mouth is too high, it looks like his forehead is dancing. Things like text that you added in look out of place and incorrect. Green rock. The intro and outro are a bit too long, for pacing reasons I suggest you edit this.
That's all of them. I hope you read this and respond if you do not agree with some of my reasonings and hope to clear them up. Good Luck.
Thanks for the criticism, I actually have flash now so it should be better animation, and I’m getting better. Yes the head animation was horible and lazily made, after watching some tutorials I now am better at that at least a little and intro will be shortened. Finally... prepare for cringey voice acting from me!!! :3
lazily made and not really too amusing. sprites could have better animation than just heads moving in two parts (i think red's hat was talking around halfway through?) editing was choppy especially around the illuminati part, and you could have at least taken the time to take out or change the end card.
Yes I’ll take out the end card in the future and thanks for the criticism, I’ll do better next time!