I cannot express how much I love this. The effort alone is more than enough to make me like it, but not only is love attention put into it; the art style is amazing and incredibly well done, not filling into the lazy stereotype I usually find in this visual novel genre. Particularly those geared more toward explicitly adult themes.
I'm someone who adores a buttload of dialogue, and even though this is fairly sparing in that department the characters and situations I felt were gotten across very well, melding the art with the writing even with the simple expression changes in the conversational sections.
I can honestly say that I haven't found anything that made me want to support the Makers' Patreon more than this right here, were I not already pinching pennies myself I would absolutely be doing everything I could to make it so these artists could do this full time.
So, in short Thank you Dusky Hallows Studio for giving us this, particularly as generously as you have been. You're amazing, and I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.